the chart below shows the sale of cars and trucks in Italy from 2001 to 2008

Essay topics:

the chart below shows the sale of cars and trucks in Italy from 2001 to 2008.

The line graph depicts the information about marketing of both cars and trucks in thousands rupees in spacific county in italy during period 2001 and 2008.

After analyzing it can be seen clearly that as regards sale of cars, it began with amounts 25 thousands in 2001, and then it increased steadly in 2001 to 2003 to reach at 40,000. Before a declined about 30 thousands rupees in 2006, the sale of cars remained stable in 2003 and in 2004. Whilst, at the end of the period, the sale reached at the peak point in 2008, it was 50 thousands rupees.

On the other hand, regarding sale of trucks, the sale started in 2001 at about 20 thousands. This figure, which hit a dip down at 15,000 in 2002, and during 2002 and 2003, the remain unchanged trend was followed by sale of trucks with same previous amount. Over the next year, the sale hit a high of amount in 2004, which was above of 30 thousands. Before last two years, the sale of trucks had been gone continuously at a bottom about 5 thousands.

Overall, the marketing of both cars and trucks had negligible defference at the starting years, while, at the final stage, the difference between both sales spread sharply in given time periods.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...,000 in 2002, and during 2002 and 2003, the remain unchanged trend was followed by sale of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, then, while, as regards, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57407407407 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33127481213 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.329307357 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236890229012 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108896304812 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514468620771 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157554695577 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481801790792 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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