We live, today, in electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by thechnology. Yet many people seem no closer to feeling happy in their lives. Discuss.
In modern scenario, the technology has been advanced with the demand of time. It provides few benefits to interaction for many people. However, others do not feel happy with this achievement in their life. Both sides will be discussed by me in the upcoming paragraphs .
To begin with, there are manifold factors which show merits of technology Some for society. The primary benefit is that the way of communicate among people through online website and some social applications: facebook, whatsapp Instagram and many more has become a prevalence trend. As through this way, the majority of people can be interaction with each others at any time and any where. Due to this, they will be able to save money and time. For example, in the past days without advance technology, people used to spend more money on the transportation and waste more their valuable time as compared to the present days. Thus, the advance technology has changed totally way of living of individuals in the society.
On the other hand, there are distinct reasons Why a number of people are not happy with this phenomenon. The major one is that most of the people like children, youngsters and another aged, who are habitual of using some gadgets such as mobile phones and computers. As through these, they are not able to spend their valuable time with their family members. Owing to this, in this case, mostly elder people feel alone at home and face many diseases in lives. for instance, old citizens do not have a proper knowledge regarding electronic gadgets and can not involve in this trending environment like others and there are some chances which increase to bad effect of as mentally and also physically. Hence, Technology leads a generation gap between people as elders and children in order to participate with them each other.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, technology brings both some negative and positive development in different parts of life of individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02153846154 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64673270715 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2290256455 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136484461212 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460417369977 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311740202865 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776285066505 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459415510426 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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