The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided Into three categories, from 1995-2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given bar graph gives information on the telephone calls by the people of UK from 1995 to 2002. As is presented in the illustration, most of the UK citizens made local calls and over time the popularity of cell phones increased rapidly.
According to the bar chart, initially in 1995 more than 70 billions of minutes were spent by people who made local-fixed line calls while 37 billion minute was national and international fixed line calls and only 3 billion minutes were spent by people people made cell phone calls. The use of local- fixed line increased steadily until 1999 when it reached to 90 billion minutes and after that the number decreased each year and finally reached to 72 billions in 2002. The national & international-fixed dial call type increased each year and reached to 61 billions in 2002 from the initial figure of 38 billions in 1995. Finally the number of cell phone calls increased significantly each year which shows it increase in popularity over the period. In 1995, the mobile phone calls was only 2 billions minutes and in 2000 it reached to approximately 25 billions minutes. Over the next 2 years this number increased to 45 billion and that shows the popularity and increase of mobile phone usages of UK people over the period.
In summary, Mobile phone calls gained a significant popularity among UK callers and as of 2002, the local-fixed line calling is still the most used calling among UK people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '70 billion'.
Suggestion: 70 billion
... bar chart, initially in 1995 more than 70 billions of minutes were spent by people who made l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: people
...nd only 3 billion minutes were spent by people people made cell phone calls. The use of local...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... initial figure of 38 billions in 1995. Finally the number of cell phone calls increase...
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
... significantly each year which shows it increase in popularity over the period. In 1995,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the most used calling among UK people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, still, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85425101215 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69356951411 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465587044534 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8585653946 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.222222222 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232371152699 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12438025982 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534759296442 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169152579104 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349004917529 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.