There are many different types of music in the world today. why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays ?
Nowadays, music plays a very important role in everyone's life. Music provides enjoyment, fun in people's life. Now traditional music is lost because international music has increased. I will discuss my point in coming paragraph.
To begin, music gives refreshment, happiness in people's life. People listening music everywhere, relax at home, long distance travelling and also some people listen to music for different purposes such as marriage ceremony,disco club, parties and so on. If someone fall in love with someone, music will help them to express their feelings. Music is an expression of our culture. People also enjoy traditional music on events, marriages ceremony. People will sing a song of our tradition music in special occasion. Nowadays, teachers teach music to their children such as play guitar, keyboard, tabla, drum and so on.
Moreover, the tradition music is so important as compared to international music because tradition music reminds our culture, our past history and also we have our own charm to present tradition music in any event or our life. Tradition music also helps as to our future generation people because that time they will know about our culture otherwise stay with our culture, tradition music also teaches about past people history and helps societies remember and retain our national and culture identity.
Nowadays people are most interested in international music because more and more people travel to other countries and they touch with their culture, so international music directly effect on people's lifestyle. people love to listen different kind of music.
To pen down and saying, people have different taste of music so only one type music is not important and useful. Traditional music should be important and also nowadays people touch with traditional music because they learn in school/college or otherwise music classes, so people enjoy traditional and international music in many ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , disco
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'falls'.
Suggestion: falls
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.322674418605 0.247107183377 131% => OK
Verbs: 0.122093023256 0.155533422707 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104651162791 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0581395348837 0.0501214627716 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0581395348837 0.0437548338989 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110465116279 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0203488372093 0.0403226058552 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75880680625 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0290697674419 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00290697674419 0.00163938923432 177% => OK
Determiners: 0.0203488372093 0.0861772015684 24% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0145348837209 0.021408717616 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1954.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.38562091503 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37908496732 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303921568627 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225490196078 0.203846283523 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166666666667 0.137316102897 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75880680625 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.56093040696 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.5180414731 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.008331359 49.517814964 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.941176471 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.814263465372 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 48.3921568627 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.90243902439 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385531905832 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109065706257 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.119880531845 0.0668466124924 179% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575122355618 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18612421548 0.148594505496 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175377880718 0.134430193775 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795870085842 0.0742795772207 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373064098188 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0766510982257 0.0638462369009 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272025007597 0.228012699653 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525207956477 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 5.90881763527 220% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.