The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram expresses the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
Overall, In between twelves countries the USA stands at the top of gettings medals. On the contrary, Japan got the lowest amount of medals in all the other countries. However, the First six countries got more than 500 medals where the other six countries got lower than 500 medals.
In the above chart, the USA has a massive amount of medals which is more than 2000. However, the difference between the first and second position is 1000 which is holding by the Soviet Union and the amount is approximately 1000. then the amount goes downwards direction by the difference of approximately 40 percent obtained by the UK around 700 medals. Moreover, France has got around 500 to 600 medals, and Germany, Italy got approximately the same amount of medals. Which are 500 and they are in 5th, 6th position.
Furthermore, Sweden, Australia, Hungary, East Germany, Japan, and China gets less than 500 medals. But, between the last six countries, the difference is too low.
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...40 percent obtained by the UK around 700 medals. Moreover, France has got around ...
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...reover, France has got around 500 to 600 medals, and Germany, Italy got approxima...
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...any, Japan, and China gets less than 500 medals. But, between the last six countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9606741573 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59434406617 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5880728868 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992311287156 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480259525134 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067463455004 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947062506377 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920580458576 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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