The bar chart compare twelve countries in terms of the overall number of medals that they have won at the Olympic Games.
It is clear that American is the most successful medal winner. Which is noticeable is that the numbers of gold, silver and bronze medals won by any particular country tend to be quite similar.
The USA has won a total of around 2,300 Olympic medals, including approximately 900 gold, 800 silver and 600 bronze medals. Next comes the Soviet Union, which has nearly 1,000 in total. The UK, France, Germany and Italy also gain more than 500 medals, and their distribution of three kinds of medals are alike with each other.
The figures for Olympic medals won by other six countries are all well below 500. And the Sweden, Australia, Hungary, East Germany and Japan have a similar proportion of each medal color. While there is a exception, China, with a noticeable higher proportion of gold medals (about 45 percent) compared with silver (about 30 percent) and bronze (about 15 percent).
- The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling. 61
- In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one s own family Why might people want to do this Is it a positive or negative development 31
- The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996 78
- The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. 73
- The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84393063584 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33372868002 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2896161801 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1111111111 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326986211665 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133384878053 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117490309734 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211785184122 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999441416003 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.