Recently, people's interests in researching the history of their own family have a increase trend in many countries. There are surely some reasons why this event happens, and in my opinion, the development would be quite positive in several aspects.
Various factors are considered to have connection with this dramatic trend. One explanation may be that people want to know more about themselves, including their family roots, the place they came from or whether their ancestors had similar personality traits. The curiosity about these things may help to motivate them to dig deeper for answers. Another factor could be that, given the speed that Internet id developing, it would be much more easier for people to carry out family history research as the time goes by. Also, it may be that people are just curious about whether they have famous or wealthy ancestors, in order to satisfy their little vanity.
The popularity in researching family history do have some positive effects. Firstly, people could cultivate it as a fascinating hobby which helps them to speed free time. Since nowadays people's lives are getting more stressful, it may become a good talking point with family or friends, especially when they discover a particular interesting ancestor. Secondly, the process of searching information could be a good way to teach children the history knowledge that they probably would not be able to gain from school, such as how earlier generations lived and the inner relationship between the family name. Finally, people could even find their 'long-lost' family members when they are exploring the family tree, and to strengthen the relationship between each other.
In conclusion, the increasing popularity of family history research is caused by loads of reasonable factors, and people can definitely benefit from this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ng the history of their own family have a increase trend in many countries. There...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...nternet id developing, it would be much more easier for people to carry out family history ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29591836735 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6327695135 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0489701021 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203227740401 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847750695338 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812648019602 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14910882655 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549870266752 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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