The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
The bar chart compares 12 countries in terms of how many medals they had won at the Olympic Games.
It is noticeable that the USA by far had the highest number of medals in total, with the amount over twice as much as that for the country ranked second. Except that, the difference of medals won by other countries was not obvious.
The USA had won over 2250 medals overall at the Olympic Games, with approximately 900 gold medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze. The Soviet Union, winning less than half of Americans medals (1000 medals), ranked in the second place. Similar to the proportion for America, the number of gold medals was higher than silver and bronze for this country.
The UK was in third place and had earned about 750 medals. With the exception of France, Germany and Italy, the total number of medals for other countries were under 500. Interestingly, we can see there was a comparingly higher proportion of gold medals for China, with 200 gold medals out of 400 overall.
- The charts below show the main reasons for the study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers 80
- In some countries parents expect children to spend long time studying in and after school and have less free time Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children and society that they live in 67
- Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem Other believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 89
- TPO 49 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: Except; Except for
... place and had earned about 750 medals. With the exception of France, Germany and Italy, the total nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69142857143 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31217540469 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2292507933 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288867400057 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130807027508 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085280803308 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20316723578 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669242012554 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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