The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main

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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams illustrate values that one country earn from exporting five different categories from 2015 to 2016.
Overall, the export value in most categories witnessed an upward trend over the period. Petroleum products had the highest value among the exports while the textiles showed the most significant growth from the period.

The value earned from petroleum products increased slightly from over 60 billion to approximately 63 billion dollars which was a 3% increase in the money gained . The earning from engineered goods in 2015 was 56 billion dollars, this figure rose by 8.5%, earned 62 billion dollars in 2016.
As regard of gems and jewelry, 42 billion dollars was earn from exporting these kind of good in 2015. Over the period shown, there was a decrease by 5.18% from this industry. Textiles earning export showed the most striking growth from 2015 to 2016 at 15.24% increased value. In contrast, the exporting value from agricultural products were almost identical throughout the period with just an increase by 0.81% reported.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...5%, earned 62 billion dollars in 2016. As regard of gems and jewellery, 42 bil...
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...016. As regard of gems and jewellery, 42 billion dollars was earn from exporti...
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... and jewellery, 42 billion dollars was earn from exporting these kind of good in 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, while, in contrast, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27380952381 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52563621212 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5613661704 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216714643729 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115100788804 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857973607236 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172199191508 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848780895264 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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