The bar chart and the table give an overview about the exports' value in billions of one country in various categories during 2015 and 2016 and the value difference between the years. The categories are petroleum products, engineering goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products and textiles.
In general, the export income of petroleum products outnumbered all of the other sectors. In addition, the year 2016 performed slightly better than 2015 in most of the categories.
As can be shown from the graph, petroleum products valued the highest among all other exports (around $60 billon for both years). The petroleum products' value increased fractionally by 3% in a year. This is followed closely by engineering goods' $55 and $60 billion, a 8,5% improvement in earnings. By contrast, the earnings for textiles were the smallest out of the categories, contributing $25 and over $30 billion in 2015 and 2016 respectively, which is an impressive 15,24% rise.
Regarding agricultural goods, the income in 2015 was around $30 billion then increased by 0,81% the following year. For gems and jewellery, their earnings stood accounted for over $40 billion in the first year then declined by 5,18%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ncome of petroleum products outnumbered all of the other sectors. In addition, the year 20...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'billon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'billons'.
Suggestion: billons
...ighest among all other exports around 0 billon for both years. The petroleum products ...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y by engineering goods 5 and 0 billion, a 8,5% improvement in earnings. By contra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, then, well, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19791666667 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91590391812 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7653463565 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21115290933 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083023348945 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105373870948 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145711376332 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115404679541 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.