The bar chart gives an overview about the value of four major international money market indexes (UK's FTSE 100; US's Dow Jones; Korean's KOSPI and French's CAC 40) from 2005 to 2008.
In general, the four international money markets all showed a downward trend. In addition, the UK market index remained the highest while the Korean market index stayed the lowest throughout the time frame.
As can be seen from the bar chart, the FTSE 100 surpassed all of the other money markets. Starting at nearly 11000, the value surged considerably by about 10000 from 2005 to 2007. However, the figure witnessed an exponential drop in 2008 when it was half its value in 2007, ended the period at nearly 9000. This is followed closely by the Dow Jones indexes, starting the period with under 6000 then gradually rose to 6500 in 2 years before decreasing by a third of its level in 2007.
Regarding KOSPI, from 2005 to 2008, the value fluctuated slightly, reaching a peak of 2000 in 2007 then fell back to its level in 2005, which is a mere 1000. For CAC 40, the bar chart recorded a slight change in the value of its money market indexes, it started at under 5000 and increased insignificantly by a small figure before plummeting to over 3000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, then, third, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64840182648 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43718440198 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598173515982 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4981778568 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.111111111 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38373705797 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158401904098 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14146804874 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272870732755 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157248122849 0.0819641961636 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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