The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The charts given illustrate the changes in export earnings of a country through five diferent industries from 2015 to 2016 measured in billions of dollars. Overall, this country experienced a upward trend in all earnings except for gems and jewellery, which experienced a moderate drop. While petroleum products and engineered goods ranked first, it was the textiles that ranked last in the contribution in the revenue.
The two main earners were petroleum products, which slightly went from just over $60 billion to $63 billion in 2016, and engineered goods with a more sizeable increase from $57 billion to $.62 billion. That translated to a mere 3% rise for the petroleum and nearly 9% rise for the engineered products.
In comparison with these two main exports, the other industries were much lower. Gems and jewellery, the only to decrease, fell to a 5,18% low from $44 billion to just over $40 billion. Despite this moderate reduction, there was a negligible growth in the value of agricultural products at 9,81% from $31 billion to $32 billion .It is worth noting that, textiles were the lowest in 2015 with about $26 billion ,however, it made a hefty 15% leap to a level as high as agricultural products in 2016.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
... rise for the engineered products. In comparison with these two main exports, the other ...
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8640776699 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76334285232 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567961165049 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8214567818 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114247112648 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524986828385 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761479028405 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835210662891 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440173569242 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.