The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.

The both pie chart and table in combination depicts the destination of graduates Anthropology students and their salaries after working 5 years in different sectors.
Overall, the maximum percentage of students are engaged in full time work, while, an insignificant proportion of students are continuining their study with part time job after graduates.
In details, the significant proportion (52%) of graduates are involve in full time job without further study, while, 8% students are perusing their post grade study. The second largest percentage (15%) students are doing only part time job, although, 12% students are still unemployed. A tiny portion of student (5%) are only able to further their study with part time job and no record was found of 8% students.
As salary table outlines, 50% of government workers are leading in the highest salary range of over $100,000, while, freelance and private companies are in 40% and 30% respectively. Freelance consultants are contributing in lead position of earning between $75,000 to $100,000, although, private companies are in leading position in earning below $75,000 and $50,000 with 35% and 10%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...m percentage of students are engaged in full time work, while, an insignificant proportio...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...dents are continuining their study with part time job after graduates. In details, the s...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
...ificant proportion 52% of graduates are involve in full time job without further study,...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...portion 52% of graduates are involve in full time job without further study, while, 8% st...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... percentage 15% students are doing only part time job, although, 12% students are still u...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e only able to further their study with part time job and no record was found of 8% stude...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...8% students. As salary table outlines, 50% of government workers are leading in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31491712707 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80462798927 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7731333986 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139600918113 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078031344577 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989401268647 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118121177672 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113030502781 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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