The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph line and table in combination depict, the ratio of water uses in different sector world widely, from 1900 to 2000, additionally, the level of water consumption in different countries, Brazil and Congo.
Overall, as shown in graph line, the whole world use maximum water in agriculture sector and minimum level of water was consumption in domestic use.
To begin with, in 1900, almost the same figure (100km3), a significant portion of water was used in industrial and domestic use. But, over the time, the ratio of water uses gradually increases in both sector, while from 1940, Industrial sector start using water in huge quantity than domestic. In 1960, domestic use slightly decrease and became less than 100km3 and after that reaches 300km3 in 2000 by increasing gradually, which is the highest level of domestic use. As per the industrial use, by noticeable increasing, it reached around 800KM3 in 2000, as a highest level.
Secondly, the agriculture sector is the highest user of all the time among three sectors. In 1900, roughly 500Km3 water was consumption in this sector, while with the rocketed increases, in 1940, it became almost 1000km3 and in 2000 it reached almost 3000km3.
Furthermore, as the table illustrates, Brazil use the maximum water in agriculture sector (26500km2, while, Congo was only 100km2. AS per the, per person consumption also, Brazil exceed Congo by huge ratio 359m2 and 8m2 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...g, it reached around 800KM3 in 2000, as a highest level. Secondly, the agricultu...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Brazil) must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...rmore, as the table illustrates, Brazil use the maximum water in agriculture sector...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...2, while, Congo was only 100km2. AS per the, per person consumption also, Brazil exc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1452991453 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65666269467 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.07073170732 654% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2816758158 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195168144627 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923890560486 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714880965041 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137519925894 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656934940105 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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