The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.

The pie chart illustrates the occupation of Anthropology students graduating from one university, while the table compares their income in different sectors after five years of graduation.

It is clear that a vast majority of Anthropology graduated students chose a full-time job, whereas part-time work and postgraduate study were less to be chosen. In addition, in terms of salaries, most Anthropology graduates earn over $ 75 thousand, but the incomes for those working in freelancer consultants and government sector were higher than in private companies.

Looking at the pie chart in more details, more than a half of the graduated students were employed full-time while the proportion of graduates working part-time or not having a job are significantly lower, with 15% and 12% respectively. It was not a common choice for people after graduation to study full-time after their graduate with 8%, and the equivalent is exactly true with those whose occupations were unidentified. The percentage of Anthropology graduates choosing to study combining with working part-time was the lowest, which accounted for just 5%.

Regarding the table, freelancer consultants were employed with upper salary scale with equally 40% for both 75,000- 99,999 dollars and more than a hundred dollars, while only one-fifth of them were paid with the salary ranging from $ 25,000 to under $75,000. A similar pattern is true for those working in the government sector, except more people earned the working payment of $ 100,000 with 50% and 30% of graduates received $75,000 to $99,999. In contrast, private companies were recorded to pay a lower salary, with only 55% of people earned the upper income collectively, whereas 10% were paid the lowest income and 35% received the payment from $50,000 to $74,999.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$75'.
Suggestion: $75
..., most Anthropology graduates earn over $ 75 thousand, but the incomes for those wor...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$25'.
Suggestion: $25
... were paid with the salary ranging from $ 25,000 to under 5,000. A similar pattern i...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$100'.
Suggestion: $100
...re people earned the working payment of $ 100,000 with 50% and 30% of graduates recei...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 282.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3475177305 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85393681971 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.1107594919 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.555555556 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173992860339 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923320244097 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705959936936 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14024191906 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807442601634 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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