THE CHART BELOWSHOWS THE PERCENTGE OF HOUSEHOLDS IN OWNED AND RENTED ACCOMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011.

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THE CHART BELOWSHOWS THE PERCENTGE OF HOUSEHOLDS IN OWNED AND RENTED ACCOMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011.

The bar graph illustrates, the comparison of rented and owned households in accommodation in England and Wales during the period of 1918 to 2011. Units are measured in percentage.

Overall, it is clear from the graph that, significant reduction in rented households in comparison with owned one over the period given. While, in turn of owned things escalating rapidly following the years.

Household in owned accommodation was about mere 22% at the beginning period which is the smallest percentage in given years. However, there was an improvement in later years and reached into approximately 33% in 1939 and 1953. Then the ratio was increased dramatically to 50% and remained constant with rented households by the year of 1971. After a decade owned households exceeding the percentage of rented households by 60% and remained relatively stable in next 20 years with near 70 %. Whereas, in 2011, there were slight decline in owned households and finished with around 65%.

Regarding rented households in accommodation has a noticeable downward trend over the years. Such as, in 1918, the account of rented households was the highest which is approximately 77% but, trend reached in below 70% in 1953. After sharing the same proportion with owned households , trend went down to 40% in 1981. Furthermore, in later years, the percentage of rented accommodation plummet to just over 30% before went up to about 35% in 2011.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, whereas, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22077922078 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9171165828 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541125541126 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7669025036 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285835149065 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109281237058 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889837150269 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203119404392 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753469872632 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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