The chart shows the average monthly temperatures in three African cities

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The chart shows the average monthly temperatures in three African cities

The line graph compares the temperature records on a monthly basis in three distinct cities in Africa, namely Mombasa, Cairo and Cape Town over a year.

Overall, It is evident that the average temperature per month in Mombasa experiences stability with few modest changes throughout the period, while variable trends are observed in that of Cairo and Cape Town. Additionally, Mombasa is obviously the most humid city of all the mentioned categories.

In January, the temperature record in Cape Town is 70℉, compared with 55℉ in Cairo, before they observe contrasting patterns. Specifically, Cape Town’s monthly temperature experienced a modest drop by 3 to 5 degrees while Cairo’s is on the increase. It is not until April do these two figures have each other at roughly 65℉, after which then reaches the bottom and peaks respectively in the turning point of July, at 55℉ and just above 80℉. In the last 5 months of the year, two cities return to their earlier patterns, ending up at 58℉ and 69℉ before seeing equal temperatures once again in November, with 65℉.

Meanwhile, the average temperature recorded over the year in Mombasa went in the opposite direction. Where the figure recorded stabilized around 75℉and 80℉, except for a peak of 83℉ in March and the lowest degree of 75℉ in July.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10091743119 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70197114966 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9218907589 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.555555556 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205304278698 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911196044251 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643734339701 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135730937353 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490367042546 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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