The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the including the prediction of the future

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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the including the prediction of the future

The bar chart compares statistics of urban demographic increase in three areas and worldwide in 1950, 2000 and projected growth by 2030.

Overall, there was an overall growth in the proportion of countryside inhabitants in all regions and in the world as a whole. Additionally, it is forecast to rise further by 2030.

In 1950, only 30% of people dwelled in urban regions. However, half a century later, there was a surge in this number as it witnessed a rise to just under 50%. By 2030 the figure is expected to have a successive growth of 10% Meanwhile, Latin America’s data on urban dwellers was highest of all mentioned categories, rising from 40% in 1950 to 70% in 2000, with a predicted further increase to 80% in 2030

However, the figures and trends for Africa and Asia are similar. In Africa, about 11% were urban dwellers in 1950, compared with 12% in Asia. By 2000, the numbers then experienced a sharp increase to almost 40% in both continents. In 2030, the data of urban population in Asia is projected to grow higher than that of Africa, at 55% and 50% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71727748691 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73353588143 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1784707821 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128335190814 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516129479294 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420533314424 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794673034283 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306057849764 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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