A glance at the provided bar chart illustrates the comparation of the snow depth (cm) in several ski resort in Canada on average in three different years by month from November to April. In general, it is clearly apparent that in the three years compared, the snow depth was higher in February to April.
Looking in more detail from the charts, although there was an increase in the deep downwards of the snow from November to January, the profundity of the snow reported only at near 80 cm to 180 cm which reached the thinnest in year two and the thickest in year three. On the other hand, in the last three months, the depth of the snow dramatically rose at the range of 300 cm to 470 cm. Interestingly, the profile of snow deepness in February and March were similar which reach around 450 cm, 400 cm, and 350 cm in year one, year two, and year three, respectively. However, in April, the deepest snow captured in year two at 470 cm which 70 cm higher that year two. Meanwhile, the thinnest was noted in year three at 300 cm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39267015707 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43728383909 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513089005236 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6370447883 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423705342275 0.215688989381 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234361995836 0.103423049105 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567302178774 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360445252878 0.15604864568 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312176821449 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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