Dear Salman khan,
I hope this letter finds you happy and healthy.i wish
you and your family members are fine.How is your job going on hope everything is fine at your .It was really great and adventures being with you on holiday at a hill station.I never expected that place will be fantastic and fabulous.
Actullay, I left my kindle at your farmhouse.I like your Farmhouse because it was built at the outskirts of the city and I feel so relax at your place and there was no pollution and traffic. I loved the food and it was really palatable.It was really great being with you at the farmhouse.
I would Wish to see you soon again for sending of my kindle. I wanted to share my address with you.so, you donot have problem while sending my kindle at my home.
Name: Mohd. Athaur Rahman,
H.No:-4-91/22,
Street:-Banjarahills,
City:- Hyderabad,
Pincode:- 500001.
- Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy Which opinion do you agree with Discuss both options and give examples 56
- The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pro 73
- New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 67
- Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy Which opinion do you agree with Discuss both options and give examples 56
- Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work Which do you think is the best way to choose a career Give reasons for your answer and include any 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Salman khan, I hope this letter finds you happy an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...this letter finds you happy and healthy.i wish you and your family members are ...
^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etter finds you happy and healthy.i wish you and your family members are fine.How...
^^^
Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: How
... you and your family members are fine.How is your job going on hope everything is...
^^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...going on hope everything is fine at your .It was really great and adventures being...
^^
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ing on hope everything is fine at your .It was really great and adventures being w...
^^
Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...g with you on holiday at a hill station.I never expected that place will be fanta...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... place will be fantastic and fabulous. Actullay, I left my kindle at your farmh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...lay, I left my kindle at your farmhouse.I like your Farmhouse because it was buil...
^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ed the food and it was really palatable.It was really great being with you at the ...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...great being with you at the farmhouse. I would Wish to see you soon again for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. I would Wish to see you soon again for sending o...
^^
Line 8, column 3, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...y home. Name: Mohd. Athaur Rahman, H.No:-4-91/22, Street:-Banjarahills, Cit...
^^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me: Mohd. Athaur Rahman, H.No:-4-91/22, Street:-Banjarahills, City:- Hyderabad...
^^^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... H.No:-4-91/22, Street:-Banjarahills, City:- Hyderabad, Pincode:- 500001. ...
^^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... City:- Hyderabad, Pincode:- 500001.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84105960265 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8273725169 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635761589404 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.865438752 43.030603864 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0163814103493 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00745386811505 0.103423049105 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0125603618417 0.0843802449381 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00628136840932 0.15604864568 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00896928611541 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.