In this modern era mankind get lost somewhere so that instead of helping foreigner government giving more priority to there citizens in order to that government is aiming to improve the nation condition which is suffering from unemployment. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, although helping there own people plays crucial role for country, and it can be seen in many ways. Firstly it assist to uplift the GDP of nation, for instance if government provide better education to there people then they get superior results a good illustration of this is if scholar get quality of education then in future they give their best by their knowledge and the unemployment rate will not go high. Moreover, it can be seen that people's are migrating to another continent due to which the nation getting lack of talent, for example in NASA the employers are mostly Indians somehow how due to lack of amenities on their raised place the prefer to live another country so that its really quite hard to help a majority of people'
On the other hand, thinking about only own country and citizens is immoral in some condition like at present time whole world is suffering from pandemic of covid19 virus in this situation the countries who are capable to help they should come forward, for instance if any country have extra stock of stuffs which is indispensable to run up against covid19 they should donate to other who are in need like India sent medical supply to USA which plays essential role to overcome
In conclusion, I deem its good to help some but firstly they need to reach the situation where they do not loss by helping as well as by dint of humanity individual should not take their step back when it come to help anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69620253165 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41944401494 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 346.464659092 49.4020404114 701% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.8 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.2 20.7667163134 304% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235546341014 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10286644887 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06943876851 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124464509281 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397582934903 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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