The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the amount of men and women pass their driving test in one Asian country over the period of 30 years, from 1980 - 2010.
In general, there were always more women than men passsing the driving tests in all the for years. The number of women overcoming the driving test was highest in 2000 and lowest in 1980, while men did well in 2000 and 2010 and showed the most modest result in 1980.
It is noticeable that aroundabout 50% of women passing the driving test in the year of 1980, while this percentage in men was less than that about 20%, which was approximately 30%. Another interesting point to mention is that 10 years later, there are more women achieving the drive license, but the percentage just showed a slight increase by around 4%. Meanwhile, the percentage of men passing the test climbed substantially about 10% and stayed around 40%.
In 2000, there was a dramatical rise in the number of women passing the test, which almost reached 70%, while men also showed a considerable surge about 10% in this year. Ten years later, women showed a small plummet and stayed around 65%, but men kept the percentage at exactly the same as the previous period, which was approximately 50%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76279069767 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40432494968 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548837209302 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1195534495 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396679283507 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19203709731 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980468676094 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275768310047 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097935022654 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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