The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph illustrates the data about the proportion of the ageing population from 1940 to 2040 in three countries.
Overall, in Japan, Sweden and the USA, the number of people who is aged 65 and over is gradually increasing, and up to almost 25% by 2040.
Beginning with the figures in the year between 1940 and 2000. Generally, in this period, there was a slight fluctuation in three countries. Both Sweden and the USA had the number of older people grew significantly from about 8% up to almost 15% in the first 40 years and declined slowly to 2000. While the figure in Japan slightly decreased by 2.5%,recovered to 5% until 2000, and maintained approximately 3% from 1960 to 1983.
Since 2000, the percentage of population aged 65 and over in three countries is almost increasing. The Swedish aged population has a slowly decrease in the first 5 years. After that, Sweden and the USA have a considerably rise in the proportion of the aged. Meanwhile in Japan, this number is expected to jump sharply, which makes Japan is becoming oldest among 3 countries. In 2040, the figure of the aged 65 and more in these countries will be similar at around a quarter of total population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slowly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...easing. The Swedish aged population has a slowly decrease in the first 5 years. After that, Swede...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('considerably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
...rs. After that, Sweden and the USA have a considerably rise in the proportion of the aged. Meanwhil...
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Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...bly rise in the proportion of the aged. Meanwhile in Japan, this number is expected to ju...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75647091603 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1394481419 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21865961692 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892476550812 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801969680802 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152278567511 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792497753675 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.