The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018 (Write and improve).
Here we are represented with two tables illustrating the temperature and daylight hours in two cities (London and Sydney) from the 28th to the 30th of December 2018.
Generally speaking, both temperature and daylight hours in Sydney were transparently higher than London. Moreover, there were not any dramatic changes in both figures during the weekend in two cities.
Talking about the temperature, we can see that there were a considerable gap between the highest and lowest temperature in both cities. On the friday, in London, the max was nine celcius degree, which was five degree higher than the min while this difference was nine degree in Sydney. This gap between the max and the min increased to ten degree on the next day, which were thirdteen and three in London and twenty-eight and eighteen in Sydney.
Moving on to the daylight hours, it is noticeable that the daylight hours of Sydney approximately doubled London, about fourteen hours and eight hours, respectively. In addition, the sunrise and sunset hour during three days almost remained stable in both cities, which sunrise and sunset hour were around 8:06 and 15:58 in London, and 5:45 and 20:07 in Sydney, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, third, while, in addition, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09693877551 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6691574122 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525510204082 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.263683398 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.875 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310218037456 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141015210194 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863619510903 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201712686539 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704621091665 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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