The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.
(Write and Improve)
The represented pie charts illustrates data about four main reasons why the youngsters in a country in Africa using personal phones in the period of time from 2016 to 2019.
Generally speaking, social networks was the most popular reason, followd up by email, digital camera, and phone call was the less utilized reason from 2016 to 2018. In 2019, there was a small different pattern where digital camera showed a bit more common than email.
Most noticebably of all, it can be seen that social networks almost stayed around a half over the four years, which was precisely 50% in 2016, then it fell just 2% in 2017, and began to show a slight increase of 3% in 2018, before reached 56% in 2019. Another trend that can be observed is that phone calls was the least common reason with just 10% in 2016 and even dropped a half in 2019.
Meanwhile, it shows that the ratio of teenagers using emails plummet gradually from a quarter in 2016, then dip 1% in 2017, countinued to fell 4% in 2018 before went under a fifth in 2019. It is also worth pointing out that digital camera were the main reason of 15% teenagers in both year 2016 and 2017, then it climbed moderately and reached 20% in 2019.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... in Africa using personal phones in the period of time from 2016 to 2019. Generally speakin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52995391705 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22274646307 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589861751152 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4860121039 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262175540549 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131030290074 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615705100376 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172113203933 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618466712176 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.85 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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