Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. (Write and Improve)
Nowadays, with the booming of technology, mobile phones become more affordable for everyone from infants to senior citizens. However, the topic whether pupils should be allowed to bring their phones to school or not is still controversial among adult groups. In my opinion, phones should be restricted at schools; however, this essay will examine both sides of the discussion.
To begin with the first perspective, children shoud be allowed to use phones at the schools for several reasons. First, phones are detrimental to children, especially for their eyes and their ears. Looking at the phone screen for a long time causes numerous visual disorders in children; moreover, there has been some pieces of research proving that phone's waves are harm to children's ears. In addition, bringing phones to school can results to distraction in classes. Many notifications on the phones easily distracts pupils from focusing on the lessons. Even when phones are set in silent mode, the urge to check messages or social media still affects children's performance at schools. Because of those mentioned reasons, I strongly disagree to allow children to utilise phones at school.
Although using phones at schools obviously brings numerous disadvantages to students, some parents still believe that their offspring should use phones at schools due to following arguments. At the first place, It is obvious that parents can stay in touch with their children when phones are available at schools. Furthermore, children have the right to use their phones in the break time, as long as they don't use phones during the class time.
In conclusion, although some people agree to allow their offsprings using phones at schools, others still argue phones are not necessary and harmful for the children. In my point of view, the school had better not allow pupils to use phones for the sake of their students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2091503268 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57934864438 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8594480496 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491939952068 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189034700661 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862116181329 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331423002611 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488990004044 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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