The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003. All figures in percentage
The given bar graph illustrates the information about the nine categories of sports activities, which played by the Australian boys and girls during the year 2003. The data was calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently representation.
Overall, it is evident that, the most favourable game in the boys was football whereas, the girls most interested in netball.
It can be seen that, 13% girls liked to go for swimming but boys lead than girls in swimming with 8%. Moving further, only 5% girls used to play soccer, which is very less as compared to the boys(25%). After that, the percentage of girls reached at peak point in case of netball but, boys had play netball only 2%. Apart from this, the playing habit of girls had dropping down in tennis, martial arts and atletics.
In addition to this, 8% boys interested in tennis as well as basketball but, this interest inclined in martial arts(10%). Probing ahead, girls participated in athletic, cricket and others had 6%, 2% and 12%, respectively. Nextly, boys were least interested in athletics rather than girls but, intresting habit of boys had increase regularly from atletics until others.
- Nowadays technology is increasing being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cellphone tracking and security cameras In many cases the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening 62
- Technical advancement have decreased the writing and mathematical skills of the students nowdays.Should the use of calculator and computer be limited or not? 56
- Nowadays many people believe that children should be tought history in schools however others argue that children should learn subjects that are more helpful for modern everyday life. Discuss both point of views and give your opinion. 89
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness or decreasing. What do you think are the causes of the problems and what measures take to solve. 73
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness or decreasing. What do you think are the causes of the problems and what measures take to solve. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that, 13% girls liked to go for swimming but boys lead than girls in swimming wit...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...used to play soccer, which is very less as compared to the boys25%. After that, th...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icipated in athletic, cricket and others had 6%, 2% and 12%, respectively. Nextly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04663212435 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65547959026 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0740113548 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744373253115 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323250559246 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04546447587 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457342184084 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047127643798 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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