The chart shows unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008.
<p data-adtags-visited="true" style="box-sizing: border-box; font-family: Alegreya, serif; font-size: 18px; margin-bottom: 27px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; border: 0px; outline: 0px; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">The chart gives information about the percentage of citizens of Ireland who were unemployed and the number of emigrants from the country from 1988 to 2008.</p><p data-adtags-visited="true" style="box-sizing: border-box; font-family: Alegreya, serif; font-size: 18px; margin-bottom: 27px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; border: 0px; outline: 0px; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">Overall, there was a significant decline in the unemployment rate in Ireland. Also, the number of country leavers went down during most of the examined period.</p><p data-adtags-visited="true" style="box-sizing: border-box; font-family: Alegreya, serif; font-size: 18px; margin-bottom: 27px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; border: 0px; outline: 0px; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">Regarding Ireland’s rate of unemployment, after a mild decrease from roughly 16% in 1988 to just under 14% in 1990, it experienced a slight recovery to about 15% in two years’ time. The figure then plummeted to 4% in the year 2000, followed by a six-year period of stability. However, the unemployment rate of Ireland increased to nearly 6% in the final year.</p><p data-adtags-visited="true" style="box-sizing: border-box; font-family: Alegreya, serif; font-size: 18px; margin-bottom: 27px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; border: 0px; outline: 0px; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">Starting with 60000 leavers in 1988, this number fell to approximately 55000 in 1990 before plunging to over 30000 after two years. The number of Ireland’s emigrants continued to go down to around 27000 for the next 12 years, and suddenly surged to 50000 in the year 2008.</p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 965.302439024 184% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 6.92578125 4.92477711251 141% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.7062157186 2.65546596893 215% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 283.868780488 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 250.62354239 43.030603864 582% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 354.6 112.824112599 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.2 22.9334400587 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12630670045 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837650525519 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451435892635 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12630670045 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 13.2329268293 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 61.2550243902 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.3012195122 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 23.8 11.4140731707 209% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 11.4329268293 302% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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