The chart illustrated the percentage of jobless in Australia as a report carried out in 2012 shows.
overall, we can monitor that rural area have sufficient jobs and people and the percentage was decreasing in contrast in cities people are difficult to et job and their rate of jobless increasing.
as we know the countryside have less population than cities it easy to get a job because their si no more candidates, and also duties are fewer and maybe working hours and your salary is balanced in and as we observe first months of the year was 6.5% we can see the graph is decreasing in last months of 2012 rate was 5%
in another hand, in cities is hard to get a job because of less education level and qualifications, because everyone wants to live in cities in the first months of the year 2012 was 2% but in the middle of the year, it declines and again goes up to 5%
- The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012 84
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period 84
- Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
- Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 81
- Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Overall
... a report carried out in 2012 shows. overall, we can monitor that rural area have su...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...nd their rate of jobless increasing. as we know the countryside have less popul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41104294479 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55064254841 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.379323854 43.030603864 477% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.666666667 112.824112599 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.3333333333 22.9334400587 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132428251484 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106855444178 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905946342736 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978517218489 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08165451404 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 13.2329268293 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.59 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.3012195122 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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