This graph provided us the difference between overseas students and local students how registries in Australian universities within 10 years.
overall, the number of overseas students was increasing year after year, but it was less number who starts the study. in contrast, the number of local students was increasing first years but in the last years, it became stable.
firstly, the forger students who registries in 2001 was 2000 and continuously rising they reach 8000 in 2010. but less than 2000 started their study and progress but last 2 years it became stable.
secondly, residential students were in 2001 two times the foreign students and continuously rising but in the last 4 years they no change the number, while less than 2000 was started in 2002 more than 2000 started but from that year it declines and again rising.
finally, the number of local students is more than overseas, we can observe total students is more but who commitments have less than the registries numbers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...stralian universities within 10 years. overall, the number of overseas students was in...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...t was less number who starts the study. in contrast, the number of local students ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...t in the last years, it became stable. firstly, the forger students who registries in ...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...nuously rising they reach 8000 in 2010. but less than 2000 started their study and ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ess but last 2 years it became stable. secondly, residential students were in 2001 two ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...hat year it declines and again rising. finally, the number of local students is more t...
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Line 6, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'registries'' or 'registry's'?
Suggestion: registries'; registry's
... but who commitments have less than the registries numbers.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04848484848 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52019210135 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1701778035 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280119562638 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15378494325 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092252111552 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18114138684 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930277128795 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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