hosting international sports events have been discussing most people said it has beneficial to hosting a country while others said it has no benefit, I will explain each view and also adding my opinion in this essay.
hosting international sport in different countries was popular for the last 2 decades, and people see the good effect to that guest country like the economy will rise, and also its kind of advertisement in that country for example in last world cup sports in Brazil has not known any too much information like the names of its cities and names of stadiums but all these things I learned through the world cup in 2018.
everything has side effects like renting hotels and homes price will increase and may be facing the local citizens housing problems, and pressure to local resources. as we know big cities are suffering traffic Jam so hosting big event like sports it makes them over too much, and the fun of two sports teams which playing my fight each other and some people damage where others may die.
to sum up, there are too many advantages in hosting sports, as we know rather than playing teams there are too many fans who want to watch the game, so after the sport finish, they will travel as tourism in different parties of the hosting country. as we know tourisms are an essential part of the economy of each country, anyway, I am supporting to increase like this event, mostly needed in undeveloped countries to grow their economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68992248062 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36412503778 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.3259105966 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.666666667 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245485976134 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111841231145 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850565323644 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150072177457 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069629230374 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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