The chart shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information, and make comparisons where relevant.

The figures give information about foreign trade values of some product groups of a country. The bar chart compares the data in 2015 and 2016, while the table presents the development rate of each group.

It is noticeable that the proportion of the exported products were similar. Moreover, most groups increased in trading value after a year.
In 2015, the most valuable trades were petroleum products and engineered goods, one worthed over 60 billion dollars, and the other brought about 58 billion to the country. Textiles contributed the least in five categories, accounting for around 26 billion in the earning.

In 2016, the pattern was similar. Fossil fuel still ranked first, yet it was followed closely by manufactured products. Each brought more than 60 billion to the national income. Textiles was staying in the lowest group. However, it caught up with the agricultural products at approximately 31 billion.

Looking at the table in further detail, we can see that all products but gems and jewelry increased in trading value. Textiles rose at a remarkable rate of 15.24% after one year. On the other hand, the sale of farming products did not make much of a difference and merely increased by 0.81%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08457711443 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64570921177 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5493583626 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136798894233 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467589734011 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558432906365 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792289690381 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581277650376 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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