Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many people assert that preventing the decrease in the population of some plant and animal species is vital to save the environment. However, I believe that other environmental issues also need attention.
Protecting and revising the ecosystem is crucial to improve human living conditions. For instance, oceanic plankton such as water plants, algae, and bacteria (those that photosynthesis) are known to produce 70% oxygen on Earth. Due to sewage and oil spills, the population of these creatures has sunk remarkably in the last decades, causing a rapid decline in the oxygen level of the atmosphere. In addition, the decrease in the number of an animal also has negative impacts on other species in the food chain, including human. A missing link risks the food source of all other species in the system.
Besides ecosystem issues, several problems need immediate reaction to preserve the environment. Finding alternative resources is one of them. In the last century, fossil fuels waste and emissions contaminate not only the air but also the land and the water. And as we are exhausting all the oil and charcoal mines, finding new, clean, and safe forms of energy is essential to future development.
Another difficulty is to heal the ozone holes. The amount of ultraviolet radiation penetrating through these holes is a direct threat to human health. It can cause sunburn, and even worse, skin cancer. The ozone damage can be permanent if no reaction takes place.
In brief, humans need to protect nature to safeguard themselves, and preserving wildlife is among the top urgent missions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75007572152 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0611298229 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138340140317 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391987386332 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595466397429 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725331037091 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800820936169 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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