The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide the comparison between France people and Indians in terms of age in the year, 1984.
Looking from all perspectives, it is readily apparent that India has a larger population of both genders in the age group of 0-5 whilst France has more life expectancy than India in the later ages.
India has got an upper hand in percentage over France regarding the group of offsprings and teenagers since the former has around 5-7 percent while the latter has 3-4 percent. Both have reached equilibrium at 40-45 group, reaching nearly 3%. The table has turned in the latter age groups from 45 to 85. France still got some percentage left for the adults with larger proportion for the females. On the other hand, the life expectancy significantly falls for both sex in India to the point that it has got only 1 percent for 60-65 group and a mere 2% for over 70s.
To sum up, France was able to maintain its people to live longer in 1984 with around 4-5% of the population and India turned out to lose more people as they get older although it has huge figures in childbirth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, still, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58461538462 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36062372662 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5750331418 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144307282243 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652923268613 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368650960464 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953389293893 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193479594533 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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