The first bar chart compares the quantity of married and devorced Americans from 1970 to 2000. The second bar graph illustates the marriage status of American adults in the year of 1970 and 2000.
Overall, the number of married citizens dwindled over the span of 30 years; while, the number of devorced residents fluctuated in the meantime. The comparison between 1970 and 2000 reveals the decline in the percentage of married adults.
Looking from the first bar chart, it is apparent that the quantity of married American adults decreased and the number of devorced people raised and fell over the period. The amount of marriages declined generally from 2.5 million in 1970 to 2 million in 2000. Meanwhile, the amount of devorces raised from 1 million in 1970 to almost 1.5 million in fell to 1 million in the year of 2000.
Turning to the second bar diagram, it is evident that the percentage of married and widowed adults decreased and the percentage of never married and devorced grown ups increased in the year of 2000 compared to the year of 1970. Specifically, the percentage of married people dropped more than 10%; whereas, the precentage of devorced Americans increased approximate 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99502487562 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59559443434 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422885572139 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.859229814 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.555555556 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152585917275 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875178235499 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578655003479 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112316763308 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582510796664 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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