The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided three pie charts represent an overview of average percentages of “Sodium”,”Saturated fats” and “Added Sugars” in the four different meals consumed in the USA.
Overall, the highest percentages of sodium and saturated fats used in the dinner, while the greatest sugar added in the snacks. In addition the lowest amount of all three types of nutrients used in the breakfast.
In dinner, a significant amount of sodium and saturated fats consumed by Americans and it was 43% and 37% respectively; however, sugar used by 23%. The lowest percentages of all three nutrients consumed in breakfast and it was 14%, 16% and 16% in sodium, saturated fats and added sugar respectively.
Furthermore, the higher percentage of sugar consumed in snack’s meal and it was 42%; Whereas, 14% of sodium and 21% of saturated fats used in snacks. Meanwhile, in the meal of lunch, sodium, saturated fats and added sugar consumed by 29%, 26% and 19% respectively.
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 67
- The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should spend about 20 minute 61
- Write about the following topic.It has been argued that gift giving should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?Give reasons for your answer and includ 56
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- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...verage percentages of 'Sodium','Saturated fats' and 'Added Su...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... greatest sugar added in the snacks. In addition the lowest amount of all three types of...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cant amount of sodium and saturated fats consumed by Americans and it was 43% and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33121019108 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76813908517 2.65546596893 142% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452229299363 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9807868883 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802244221466 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489369123555 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032413510529 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594683023354 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168496151488 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.