The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by ppatel on Sun, 01/12/2020 - 14:54

The provided three pie charts represent an overview of average percentages of Sodium, Saturated fats and Added Sugars” in the four different meals consumed in the USA.

Overall, the highest percentages of the sodium and the saturated fats used in the dinner, while the greatest sugar added in the snacks. In addition, the lowest amount of all three types of nutrients used in the breakfast.

In dinner, a significant amount of the sodium and the saturated fats were consumed by the Americans and it was 43% and 37% respectively; however, the sugar was used by 23%. The lowest percentages of all three nutrients consumed in the breakfast and it was 14%, 16% and 16% in the sodium, the saturated fats and the added sugar respectively.

Furthermore, the higher percentage of the sugar consumed in snack’s meal and it was 42%; Whereas, 14% of the sodium and 21% of saturated fats used in the snacks. Meanwhile, in the meal of lunch, sodium, saturated fats and added sugar consumed by 29%, 26% and 19% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93641618497 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86667907326 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398843930636 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9719264611 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848229030296 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560175949992 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402319212344 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712534471549 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314381922772 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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