The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the mean values of three kinds of nutritional factors percentage-wise, in four typical meals that are consumed in the United States of America. All of these nutrients may prove unhealthy if consumed in excess.
Overall, the diagrams depict the percentages of sodium, saturated fats and sugars in everyday breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks. The dinner seemed to have more concentrations of sodium and fats, while sugars were mostly found in snacks,
Firstly, breakfast and snacks were found to contain only small quantities of sodium, only 14 percent. The lunch seemed to carry quite a good amount at 29 percent, whereas the dinner took lead at 43 percent.
Secondly, saturated fats were least likely to be found in breakfast, while lunch and super had 26 and 37 percent respectively.
Thirdly, added sugars showed some variation from the common trend. It was recorded to be highest in snack at 42 percent, whereas breakfast contained the least amount at 16 percent, which was surprising.
- Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant. 78
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- he charts below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodations in England and wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.Discuss both th 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20606060606 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74476544968 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0644928334 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112901833812 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531958500798 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415583831733 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636517635166 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539189633963 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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