The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line charts demonstrate the modifies in ownership of electrical equipments and how long household chores need to be done in an advanced nation in one hundred years period depart from 1920 to 2019.Overall, it precisely that three electrical appliances were getting popular day by day,in particular refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. Moreover, the possessions of them increased with refrigerators have the greatest growth, so it creates an upward trend of families' ratio that own with refrigerators, vacuum cleaners and washing machines.
First of all, there is an outstanding rise-refrigerators.Initially, it began from the lowest figure with 0% in 1920. Nevertheless, it had an astonishing development in 1940 with approximately 50% and reached 90% after just 20 years later,beside that it approached the last target-100% in 1980 and the ownership is remained permanently from here, the proportion of families which have three genres of items climbed rapidly within 60 years. For vacuum cleaners, these items figure was higher than refrigerators 30% initially but the speed of raise was slower. In addition, it’s easy to realize that it increased by 20 % every 20 years (1920 - 1980),similar to the ratio of 30%-90%, the data in 1980 tripled one in 1920,it reached 100% in 2000 and there was no change later.Final applicant, washing machine used to be the highest in 1920-40%, it’s easy to get to 70% within just 20 years later.Unfortunately, there was a drop by 10 % in 1980, it led to the effect that washing machine could only recovered 70 % for the last phase.
The last one, due to the development of technology in general and refrigerators,vacuum cleaners,washing machines in private, the time that people used to do housework was getting lower from 1920 to 1980. It took an average 50 hours for the chores to be done and it lost about 10 hours every 20-year-period. As a result, it only remained 10 hours for the final phase-1980 and it was as less as five time one in 1920.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re is an outstanding rise-refrigerators.Initially, it began from the lowest figure with 0...
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...the final phase-1980 and it was as less as five time one in 1920.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in addition, in general, in particular, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 965.302439024 172% => OK
No of words: 327.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09174311927 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4299198902 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 106.607317073 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547400611621 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 283.868780488 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.334695724 43.030603864 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.0 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 5.23603664747 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148213135509 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621948200974 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666229001385 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110328062765 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361363482252 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.