The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas.
<div style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13.7614px; white-space: normal;">Generally speaking, the population growth in Bombay and Jakarta was faster than that of other cities and Tokyo had the highest residents in 2010. Moreover, a higher number of people started living in urban areas than in rural areas after 2005.</div><div style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13.7614px; white-space: normal;"> </div><div style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13.7614px; white-space: normal;">According to the bar graph, more than 15 million people lived in Tokyo in 1970 and that was higher than that of New York and Shanghai. Population in Bombay was one-third than that of Tokyo and Jakarta had only 2.5 million residents, the least among the five cities. The population in Tokyo increased to 27.6 million in 2010 and this was the city with the highest population. However, population growth in Bombay and Jakarta, almost 5.5 times, was higher than any other city listed. </div><div style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13.7614px; white-space: normal;"> </div><div style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13.7614px; white-space: normal;">The table data shows that New York was the most populous city in the world in 1950 with exactly 12.5 million people. London and Tokyo stood at the second and third position in this list while Moscow with its 5.3 million people was in 5th position. In 2010, Tokyo topped the rank followed by Bombay and Lagos.</div><div style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13.7614px; white-space: normal;"> </div><div style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; vertical-align: baseline; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 13.7614px; white-space: normal;">Finally, globally 3 billion people lived in rural areas in 1980 while less than 2 billion in cities. In 2010, the number of city-living-residents upsurged to over 4 billion while it was slightly over 3 in villages.</div>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 3.97073170732 529% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3661.0 965.302439024 379% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 465.0 196.424390244 237% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.87311827957 4.92477711251 160% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 3.73543355544 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.46769869196 2.65546596893 206% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.301075268817 0.547539520022 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 912.6 283.868780488 321% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 58.0 22.4926829268 258% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 421.271512804 43.030603864 979% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 457.625 112.824112599 406% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.125 22.9334400587 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.056727053635 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490641560258 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335138608332 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056727053635 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.7 13.2329268293 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.23 61.2550243902 -35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 6.51609756098 296% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.3012195122 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 29.25 11.4140731707 256% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 11.4329268293 297% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.9970731707 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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