the charts below show information about three different deserts around the world.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The tables officially exhibit information revolving around the three deserts all over the world. Generally, there is a wide disparity in their aspects.
It is crystal clear, in contrast to Asia and North America, the Sahara Desert, which is located in Africa, is larger by a staggering size which is 9000000 square km. Furthermore, the average annual rainfall in the Sahara is 7.6 cm in the North and 12.7 cm in the south.
It is noticeable, Average annual temperature in the Taklimakan desert, which is located in Asia, is the lowest temperature in summer among all deserts by 25 centigrade, yet the Great Bastin desert and the Sahara Desert exceed the Taklimakan by five centigrade.
The Great Bastin Desert and the Sahara Desert temperature extremes are the highest recorded by 57 and 58 centigrade, respectively.
Because of 3.8 cm raining in the west and 1.0 cm in the east, the average annual rainfall in the Taklimakan Desert is considerably lower than the Sahara Desert and Great Bastin Desert.
- Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses Is it right to exclude males and females from certain professions because of their gender Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge o 87
- the charts below show information about three different deserts around the world summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons 73
- Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate and reach your 78
- some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 56
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00595238095 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78870794577 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9528492166 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132136795214 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721981251508 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927337156385 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879340650265 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732571832716 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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