some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although some people think that the best is to accept a bad condition, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, others believe that it is better to try and improve the situation. In my opinion, it could not be far-fetched to hold the view that we do not have a chance to be calm in all bad cases.
Some people who accept the bad situation try to live at the moment, so they are not worried about any threat such as; unsatisfactory job or shortage of job money. They believe the economic situation is the same in every job department and satisfactory.
Although many people agree with this approach that less money is not a matter, sometimes this situation is too hard, and so they could not accept it. For example, when they need more money for their children's education or have no insurance to cure their diseases.
Whether or not it had been better to try and improve such a situation is another approach. Many people try to solve the problem because of hope. They believe by hope; they will have better life and trouble. The more they have hope, the more they have opportunities to have a far better life. A good illustration of this is people working in coal mines without air conditions lose their health. Whom, they have hope to find a better job, have a more chance to stay alive.
In conclusion, in no way do I agree that we can accept the terrible condition at any time. I think people with hope have a better life than people who receive a terrible situation at all times.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ey, others believe that it is better to try and improve the situation. In my opinion, i...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...e no insurance to cure their diseases. Whether or not it had been better to try and improve s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
.... Whether or not it had been better to try and improve such a situation is another app...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46715328467 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51088524788 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485401459854 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9356859684 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332609781058 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129703150911 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140890952885 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210753786964 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130083580248 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ey, others believe that it is better to try and improve the situation. In my opinion, i...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...e no insurance to cure their diseases. Whether or not it had been better to try and improve s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
.... Whether or not it had been better to try and improve such a situation is another app...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46715328467 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51088524788 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485401459854 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9356859684 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332609781058 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129703150911 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140890952885 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210753786964 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130083580248 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.