The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
The bar graph illustrates how many percentage of the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
Overall, the young person tent to choose career for their reasons of study, while elderly study for interest. Besides, employers show their interest on younger one, so they support them more than older one.
A glance at the chart provided reveals people who is under 26 age pay much attention to career in their study, making them to become the highest percentage in reasons for study. It was 70% higher than that of people who is studying for their interest. However, when people get older, they change their mind which the rate of people study for interest account for 70% in the age group “over 49” in spite of same percentage in the group which people is from 40 to 49 age, with over 40%.
On the other hand, while employers do not support too much for people who has age from 30 to 39, with only 30%, the figure for people in the age group “under 26” rise to 60%, making this group continue the highest percentage in the bar chart about employers support. Moreover, in the elderly people, they has an upward trend in the amount of support they received from employers, when they is older than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many percentages'.
Suggestion: many percentages
The bar graph illustrates how many percentage of the main reasons for study among stu...
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Line 13, column 316, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
.... Moreover, in the elderly people, they has an upward trend in the amount of suppor...
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Line 13, column 401, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...they received from employers, when they is older than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, while, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77192982456 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24939289371 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2239335512 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437750979441 0.215688989381 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206911040058 0.103423049105 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169480430428 0.0843802449381 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320986753038 0.15604864568 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188607318444 0.0819641961636 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.