The charts below show the Medical research funding amount in millions of Dollars in Someland and also shows the death number for this area.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below. Write at least 150 words.
The charts demonstrate the amount of money has spent on six Medical researches: AIDS, Leprosy, Tropical Diseases, Diarrhoea, Malaria and TB in Someland and the number of deaths caused by these illness in the same area in 1990.
Overall, what stands out from the graphs is that the money spent on the Medical Research influences remarkably on the elimination of deaths caused by those illness. For example, in Someland in 1900, AIDS has received the most funding and caused the second fewest deaths , whereas TB had the least funding but the most deaths.
Someland has pledged approximately $150 millions dollars in researching AIDS, followed by $75 millions of dollars on Leprosy and Tropical Diseases. Diarrhoea and Malaria also received $60 millions and $50 millions of dollars respectively while TB had the least support with merely $25 million.
As a result, in 1990, 1.75 millions of people in Someland died from TB which was the highest in the group. AIDS has caused 0.25 million deaths although it received the largest funding while the number of deaths of Leprosy patients was the fewest, at merely 0.1 million.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this illness' or 'these illnesses'?
Suggestion: this illness; these illnesses
...land and the number of deaths caused by these illness in the same area in 1990. Overall, w...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this illness' or 'those illnesses'?
Suggestion: this illness; those illnesses
... on the elimination of deaths caused by those illness. For example, in Someland in 1900, AIDS...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ding and caused the second fewest deaths , whereas TB had the least funding but th...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...ollars in researching AIDS, followed by 5 millions of dollars on Leprosy and Tropical Disease...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '0 million'.
Suggestion: 0 million
...nd Malaria also received 0 millions and 0 millions of dollars respectively while TB had the l...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '75 million'.
Suggestion: 75 million
...y 5 million. As a result, in 1990, 1.75 millions of people in Someland died from TB which w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so, whereas, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05405405405 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6033110804 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7318356259 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.571428571 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252193181291 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118152440321 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335161323066 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150772866526 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161617598663 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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