The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The charts represent the amount of Japanese tourists trips to overseas over decade, from 1985 to 1995, and Australia's portion of the Japanese travellers on demand. The data of Japanese tourists are calculated in millions and the frequents of visiting Australia are measured by percentage.
overall, when the figure of the traveller grew up to around a million, the number of Japanese visitor to Australia increase slightly 1%, but in the middle of decade and the end, the frequent of visitors faced in reverse. In 1989, the number of tourists rose approximately a million, from over 8 million to near 10 million, but the travellers to Australia decreased 1%, from around 5% in 1988 to near 4% in 1989. Furthermore, at the last decade, the proportion of Japanese visitors to Australia remained steady up to 6%, even though, the amount of traveller went to abroad gradually evolved up to a million from 1993 to 1995.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...charts represent the amount of Japanese tourists trips to overseas over decade, from 198...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...stralia are measured by percentage. overall, when the figure of the traveller grew ...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut the travellers to Australia decreased 1%, from around 5% in 1988 to near 4% in...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lved up to a million from 1993 to 1995.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223463687151 0.268076937826 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.0893854748603 0.116061578633 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0446927374302 0.0759168565197 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0502793296089 0.0366838410393 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.167597765363 0.155750635184 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0279329608939 0.0379272487307 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80132271419 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0670391061453 0.0210936926555 318% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00558659217877 0.00175180941692 319% => OK
Determiners: 0.106145251397 0.0948980150116 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00558659217877 0.00967000014798 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 922.0 1161.00487805 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94838709677 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.337110787985 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322580645161 0.247514529752 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.264516129032 0.171178102325 155% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116129032258 0.112407865282 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80132271419 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.546246751206 96% => OK
Word variations: 41.6651174567 49.3433353143 84% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0094962315 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7849130221 42.9750493124 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.4 135.714022679 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 23.0094962315 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.689975730869 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.84146341463 52% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 63.2580645161 47.7609492067 132% => OK
Elegance: 3.0 2.94281807926 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413498456984 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.293549725333 0.181151798455 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0539868791641 0.0850326197045 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.78375748545 0.706616315825 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0384234803552 0.157042692854 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30368183527 0.228904883108 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106962732176 0.108899403657 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.545879909473 0.367819155151 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0812612215331 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.398112399125 0.316326947829 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686918854106 0.0921553760075 75% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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