The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart and the line graph compare the number of Japanese oversea-travelling tourists and the percentage of Japanese tourist coming to Australia in the decade from 1985 to 1995. Overall, Japanese travelers gained the greatest number among the decade in 1995.
It is can be clearly seen that in the first year, there were over 4 million Japanese tourist visited foreign nations and only 2% in which came to Australia. The next 4 years, the number of Japanese travelers coming abroad jumped dramatically to just over 8 million as well as ones coming to Australia rose over twice as many as before in 1988. In 1989, the Japanese tourists’ number continued rising to nearly 10 million. Nevertheless, the amount of ones who travelled to Australia decreased moderately and peaked at about 4%.
In the coming year, there were about 11 million Japanese tourists travelling abroad while the proportion of Australia-travelled tourists remained steady comparing to 1988. Regarding to Japanese travelers, the number fluctuated at around 11 million in 3 years and stood at nearly 16 million in the last year. As for Australia’s share of Japanese’s tourist market, it rocked rapidly from under 5% to over 6% but decreased slightly to 6% in 1994. However, there was no data in 1995.
In the nutshell, the amount of Japanese tourist travelling to Australia achieved the highest percentage in 1993.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...cally to just over 8 million as well as ones coming to Australia rose over twice as ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'well', 'while', 'as for', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207843137255 0.220444632235 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.117647058824 0.167888034529 70% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078431372549 0.0606518309736 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0666666666667 0.0506257000042 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0078431372549 0.118615021944 7% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.152941176471 0.107062808482 143% => OK
Participles: 0.043137254902 0.041066498444 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96393017089 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0470588235294 0.0385302599488 122% => OK
Particles: 0.00392156862745 0.00132118243153 297% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.078431372549 0.0714148451538 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00392156862745 0.0191574576366 20% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0078431372549 0.00930345855455 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1395.0 1141.60824742 122% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.134020619 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09170305677 5.53046319177 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78085437643 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397379912664 0.284621296913 140% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28384279476 0.211203875043 134% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2096069869 0.133321485273 157% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126637554585 0.0843313296314 150% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96393017089 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524017467249 0.622163163488 84% => OK
Word variations: 48.3545556792 62.8969750728 77% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8181818182 16.4300151701 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9807721223 44.7399317507 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 90.9928171075 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 16.4300151701 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.613754768223 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 7.22680412371 55% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Readability: 49.2024612942 37.5504026743 131% => OK
Elegance: 2.10204081633 1.13073093955 186% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400138946745 0.331212695627 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120564249082 0.0927372745006 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0910213709168 0.0736520305886 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.634639661083 0.662452444078 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201052526206 0.233577193048 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215213847365 0.122183219658 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116723409276 0.0765303033291 153% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.497377955072 0.110270004696 451% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.081445830802 0.120535355502 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336704908713 0.120397337282 280% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962794709137 0.113578534861 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.54639175258 66% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.0824742268 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.62886597938 76% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 8.25773195876 61% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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