The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
A glance at the chart provided reveals some striking similarities between the Chinese and us birth rates rates " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">during the period from 1920 to 2000. it is is " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">evident that both nations saw saw " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">considerable fluctuation infertility, with lows during the 1940s and
highs during the 1950s. Increasing from approximately 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, china's birth
rates then plunged to a low of just 5 percent in the 1940s. this this " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">was followed by a period of exponential growth, with fertility in the
country reaching a peak of 20 percent in 1950. The latter half of the century,
however, brought a sustained decline in this figure. The us birth rate,
meanwhile, fluctuated at somewhere between 11 and 13 percent percent " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">prior to 1940, before dropping sharply to less 5 percent in 1945. The
following 5 years saw a rapid climb in this rate, to somewhere somewhere " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">in the vicinity of 15 percent in 1950, followed by a steady fall. it is
interesting to note that while the
birth rate of both countries was comparable until 1950, the gap between the two
widened after this time as fertility in china slid away.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96818181818 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.7838485147 2.65546596893 180% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5989130318 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.125 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119491986688 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780194996442 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788781484127 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680128876433 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670530499488 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 11.4140731707 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.