The charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time.
A glance at provided two pie charts reveals the rates of time passed on Internet activities except email of both 18-26 age people and 60-70 age people in their leisure.
On balance, there is an apparent disparity in terms of the each segment between two groups.
Regarding social networking figures, with 24 percent, it ranks first in the 18-26 age group and is three times more than that in the 60-70 age group. Moreover, the largest segment in the older group belongs to booking activities with nearly one-third, conversely, with only five percent, this activity accounts for the smallest percentage in the younger one.
The data for music and films in young citizens is higher than three percent that in elderly citizens in the comparison between 18 and 6 percent. By contrast, the rate of time on both purchasing and researching of the younger group is also lower than that of the older one. Last but not least is the data for the game that holds the minimum threshold for the old and accounts for 18 % for the young.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, moreover, regarding, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75418994413 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38319087893 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1294055988 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18345576785 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810116745727 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852574142253 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10444634259 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851298682968 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.