The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts given changes in comparison of energy production of France between 1995 and 2005. The data presents in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that the higest percentage was coal while the most negative trend was the other.
In the one hand in 1995, coal got 29.80% which the higest category, followed by gas which was 29.63% was the second higest, followed by petro which was 29,27% was the third higest, followed by nuclear which was 6.40% was the fourth higest, and the last followed by other which was 4.90%.
On the other hand in 2005, coal got increase to about 1.13%, it can be seen that from 29.80% to 30.93%. followed by gas got increment to about 0.68%, it can be seen from 29.63% to 30.31%. And then followed by petro fot experience drastic decline to about 9.72%, it can be seen that from 29.27% to 19.55%. And the next followed by nuclear got ascension to about 3.7%, it can be seen that from 6.40% to 10.10%. And the last followed by other got increase to about 4.2%, it can be seen from 4.90% to 9.10%.
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- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 61
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities study. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this. 73
- Some experts believe that is is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh than the disadvantages? 56
- The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of the educational setting in the UK in 2010. 67
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... most negative trend was the other. In the one hand in 1995, coal got 29.80%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, then, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48677248677 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12651025283 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433862433862 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.43378521 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0144078479764 0.215688989381 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0104756920368 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216306892755 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0205700693718 0.15604864568 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290904710845 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.