The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

​These pie charts given information about the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. The data presents in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that the most increase was food while the most decrease trend was housing.
​In the one hand in 1950, housing got 72.1% wich the biggest category. Followed by food which was 11.2% was the second highest. Than it was followed by education which stood at 6.6% was the third biggest. Next it was followed by other which was standing at 4.4% was the fourth biggest. Then it was followed by transportation wich noted at 3.3% was the fifth biggest. Finally, the most lowest was health care which market at 2.4%.
​On the other hand in 2010, there had some household expenditures which got increasing was food which was 22.8% wich the biggest category. Followed by other which stood at 14.8% was the second biggest. Than followed by transportation which was standing at 10.7% was the third biggest. Finally, the last was health care which market at 2.1%. In contrast, there had some which got decreasing trend was housing which noted at 50.1% which the smallest category. Then followed by education which counted at 0.3% was the second smallest.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, so, then, third, while, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91219512195 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47291575152 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439024390244 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.335780477 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1333333333 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0810266920009 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501002169039 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145028985321 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116850223348 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133682561893 0.0819641961636 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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